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That was good! Glad to see another Captain Scarlet fic here! You did tend to merge the dialogue paragaphs at the end but that could be the error of the site and not you -- sometimes the stories get a bit smushed. Keep writing in the categoery -- whoknows, maybe we'll get more stories that way.

Note: it's spelled Colonel, not Cornel ;)

Interesting story. I for 1 can't wait to read chapter 2.