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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....This is just a lex/clack story except with whitneys name replacing lex's, all the details about those two...are the details between lex and clark...
What a rip off
What a rip off
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whitney = High school quarterback, Lana's boyfriend, shithead who strung Clark up on a cross in the first edisode of "Smallville". Blond, not-so-buff, and kinda icky, I thought.
Lex = Guy who hit Clark with his car, then proceeded to drive it off a bridge and was then saved by Clark which led to the revelation of his origins. Bald, sexy, misunderstood, son-of-a-billionaire who lives in a scottish castle in the middle of Kansas.
It was a but confusing, but I believe while you were using the former's name, you were referring to the latter. Just to clarify, because I've always had a really hard time picturing Clark with anybody but Lex.
All-in-all, barring the little misadventure in renaming of one of the key characters, I thought the first chapter of "Slushy" was great. I love how youv'e portrayed Lex (if indeed that is who you were referring to) and the reactions of the others in conjunction was wonderfully real. If you ever get around to rewriting this chapter and the rest of the story I will definitely be reading and waiting impatiently for an update as all good CLex fans would.
Yay you! Rain
Lex = Guy who hit Clark with his car, then proceeded to drive it off a bridge and was then saved by Clark which led to the revelation of his origins. Bald, sexy, misunderstood, son-of-a-billionaire who lives in a scottish castle in the middle of Kansas.
It was a but confusing, but I believe while you were using the former's name, you were referring to the latter. Just to clarify, because I've always had a really hard time picturing Clark with anybody but Lex.
All-in-all, barring the little misadventure in renaming of one of the key characters, I thought the first chapter of "Slushy" was great. I love how youv'e portrayed Lex (if indeed that is who you were referring to) and the reactions of the others in conjunction was wonderfully real. If you ever get around to rewriting this chapter and the rest of the story I will definitely be reading and waiting impatiently for an update as all good CLex fans would.
Yay you! Rain
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a very good story, and I liked it a lot... but you got mixed up. In your story, Whitney is really supposed to be Lex... just thought you should know...