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for Longing With a Cherry Tomato on Top

by MrSchimpf

person Jeff
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude PLEASE update! Your story is the only reason that I still check GG fanficiton. I probably look like 5 times a week just to see if you've updated. I've been deprived of good writing for too long so please get this next chapter out as quickly as possible. I'll consider it an early birthday present.
person Jareth
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I can only re-read the same chapter so many times, even if it IS Paris/Rory....when are you going to update? Please don't tell me that's the end! We still have to see this last part from Rory's POV! We still have to see how their friends react! We still have to see how Paris will react to Rory's dealing with Francie! More! For the love of the Great Green Arklesiezure, more!
person Jareth
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting for an update! Man, I didn't think there was anyone on the planet who was a slower writer than I....but then, your chapters are a lot longer than mine. Hurry up and write more! I love this pairing, and yours is the best example of it I've found. I love the reference to Paris' dating Asher in this last chapter, by the way. I found it a little creepy, myself. :P
person hiraikotsu
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, simply amazing. This is by far the best fic that I have ever read.
person Jareth
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I'm really loving the way you keep replaying the same scenes, but from both points of view. When will you be updating? I must have more!
person Elwood
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have written so far (through part 5). It is wonderful to see such attention to detail, and a delayed gratification for the characters. Hearing both Paris's and Rory's points of view through the same period in time, where they are unwittingly falling for each other - it's just great. I can't wait for more chapters!
person Joshua
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!, I I hope you post some more soon..:) I think you've just hooked me to Gilmore Gifemsfemslash though..:)
person Acepilot
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. This story can be largely credited for getting me into Gilmore Girls Slash, and I'm hanging out to know what happens next.
person Misty
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story you should continue it and your characterizations are spot on good job hope to see more
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... very nice. You should definitely continue this story.