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for Betrayal

by vettech82

person Danielle
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just can't believe there's finally a chapter two. I have to tell you I really love this story, it's one of the only good quality Tyr/Beka fics that I have found, Can't wait for the next update.
person alex
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for writing more i love beka/tyr stories
person jade
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
smiles thanks for writing more chapters love the story
person jade
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update glad that you`re working on more chapters i really like this story
person chantal
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the chapter i`m glad you wrote another one.
person Jae
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see a Tyr/Beka story. I can't believe this is a one shot story - the ending was so inconclusive. There were so many questions that I would like to see answered. Will Beka submit to Tyr and become his willing love slave? Will Dylan and the crew of Andromeda come to Beka's rescue? Will Beka be able to save herself? Plus they were a lot of spelling errors that was distracting starting with the title “Betrayel" - UGH! However it was still an enjoyable story with good characters.
person Lady Kagome
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well hello there! I got bored this evening and ded ted to read some of my reviewers stories! I have to say, I do not watch Andromeda, but I did enjoy your story! You have a way of writing things that allowed me to picture them (even when I did not know what they werl). l). Anyway, keep up the good work, and I promise to get a new chapter up soon! ;)

~*~Lady Kagome~*~
person chantal
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Beka, Tyr is really nasty. I hope there will be another part. i like this story.