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person chrystal
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter. but i do have a slight bone to pick. the opening songs you picked was redone by Madonna but originally wrote by Eddie Cooley and Otis Blackwell. Except for that it was truly delightful to read it...and the pink kola is doing good.
person anonymous
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely one of my favorite DA stories on this site :)
person Amber
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story =] One of the best I've ever read. Both endings were very good, but the 2nd one was definitely the bestt.
person Jackie
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I liked the second ending better, but both were well written. I love Jen =] Too bad she wasn't actually a character in the show, she would've made it a lot more entertaining. My favorite part is where she reminds Alec to pack for cold weather, and then later tells him to pack for warm weather. =] Anyway, I loved the story.
person Jackie
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I liked the second ending better, but both were well written. I love Jen =] Too bad she wasn't actually a character in the show, she would've made it a lot more entertaining. My favorite part is where she reminds Alec to pack for cold weather, and then later tells him to pack for warm weather. =] Anyway, I loved the story.
person ari
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really, really liked your story. thought it so was cool. if only it happened like that in the show.... oh, well. anyhoo, i also wanted to tell you that i thought both of the endings were fine, but i kinda liked the first one a bit more. hey, wouldn't it be cool if you wrote more DA fanfix? hmm... i think so! so please, please write more! (makes puppy dog eyes) pweeze....
person Jerrica
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the original ending better, definitely.

The story was good, even though you kept changing Alec's eyes from blue to green and back again.

Keep 'em coming!
person seerborn
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my deepest gratittude for a very good read. i have loved these 2 characters for the longest of time and it is absolutely wonderful to read this fic of yours.
thank you again.
person Ashley
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the firsting ing better. Thanks for finishing it.
person CybrEmly01
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
C'mon, don't leave me hanging!! You've got me hooked, and now I'm just
sitting here, in pain. *lifts right hand* See? Look at it shaking. I think it's
withdrawel.

CybrEmly