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Wonderful fic. STrife A little hard to read at first - I wasnt sure if some of the words were just his pronunciation or because of typos, but I figured it out. I really enjoyed this.

*takes a deep breath* awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! this aint the first time Iv read it ....Iv caught it on AJCS with your other stories but it still gets me every time! Its a awsome story to read if you need a non angsty romance to help you out of your ruts! So Im sure Iv reviewed before under my previouse pen name gears.....but Im gunna do it again cause lets face it, you ca never say this enough soooooo thank you for writing this story! and its sequils of course they are awsome and just the thing to read if you need to feel better.

astria

Um, I think you have the last two chapters the wrong way round...especially as chapter 15 has The End at the bottom and then we have the body switch chapter. Other than that, fantastic! I adore Strife (how can I not, when I'm named for the Norse God of Mischief?), he's so sexily sarcastic *sighs dreamily* and it's just a generally great. Am off to read more! *Snickers at the thought of a preggers Strife*

~Loki

P.S. I love Strife's accent! Just had to throw that in.

Chap 16
Well now, I must say I am most impressed
Keep it up, if thjis is the end, it would indeed be shamefull
Wish for more
BrianDarksoul

KAWAIIIIII!! I LOVEthis firiterite some more, please? Something about Ares and Joxer, hmmm? You have werry good style of writeing, and all. And i Love happy endings!!

The story was excellent, very nicely thought out with a nice mixture of humour and angst. My only bugbear would be the bizarre accent in the narration and Strife's dialogue. It made an otherwise great fic very difficult to read. I nearly gave in a few times, glad I didn't. I'm a complete Xenaphile and have the lot on DVD, I know for a fact Strife doesn't speak like that. I guess they call that artistic license.

Yummy-licious.

I delayed my review 'cause I was all sleepy after I finished reading. So I slept, and
this 'un spawned some... -interesting- dreams.

And no, I'm not gonna share. =P So nyah! I'm spoiled that way.

CybrEmly

Hey now, I only ramble senselessly at authors whose work I actually
like and/or admire. (Usually both) If I didn't 'like and/or admire' said
work, I'd just not do anything.

I don't flame. It makes one seem a 'flame'-ing idiot. Unless it's
constructive criticism. Which is what it's called: constructive criticism.

Anyways, back to the point. Here I am, all appreciative, and your personal
muses aren't inspiring you. Should I arrange for a proper offering?

CybrEmly

I just noticed that I forgot to mention Cupid in my last review. But then, who really
needs to be reminded how hot he is? Or how squeezeable? 'Specially that butt.
*Wipes drool off chin*

I think that was all I wanted to write... but one can never tell where I'm concerned.

CybrEmly

So cute! I just want to cuddle them to pieces. 'Specially Strife and Bliss. who who wouldn't want to cuddle Bliss?

Now don't mind me, I'm just gonna sit here and wait for an update.
*Drumming fingers on the desktop* No rush.

CybrEmly