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this is a wonderful story. i love how ian and sara have problems and that it's not a perfect relationship. i love the trouble they went through and how it wasn't always fixed. i would love a sequel. any chance of that? you have done a wonderful job!

This is absolutely amazing fanfiction. I'm not exaggerating at all to say it's the best Witchblade fanfic I've ever read, and one of the best fanfics of any fandom. I can't wait for the sequel!

This story was GREAT. It took me a few day to complete, but it was worth the time.

I hope you write a continuation to the story.

I love this story. I cried myself to sleep after I read it. You are an incredible writer.

Thank you for the wonderful feedback. Hi Lursa - I remember you very well and your wonderful comments. And thanks to my new readers. The sequel to "Breathing Space" isn't done yet because I'm enmeshed in a new story that's grown almost as long as "Breathing Space." It's called "Blood Seduction" and your wonderful feedback has encouraged me to post that story here as well. I'll probably get it out here over the weeked. That's still a work-in-progress so I'll be updating it as I continue writing. I'll also try to get to the "Breathing Space" sequel soon. It's called "Holding the Centre" and promises to be as long and involved as "Breathing Space" - which is why I haven't started it yet. Thanks again for your lovely, lovely feedback. You guys ROCK!

This is the best fanfic I have ever read. I am off now to see if you wrote the sequels. If you haven't and I find you, you may need the Witchblade to defend yourself until you do. What a talent and what a story.

Thank you, thank you.

Slally!!!
I found you again. I'm so pleased. This is one of my all time favorite stories. Brava, Brava!!
Please keep writing. I love your writing style and I definitely love what you do when you mix Ian and Sara. I followed this story when you posted to the Witchblade Board...Llan an Callech...or something like that. I haven't been able to access it and thought your words were lost to me forever. Imagine my surprise to find you here.
Doing the 'happy dance'!!!

I loved this story!!! I don't usually bother to write in to comment, although sometimes I should, if only to encourage well-deserving authors, but this story was so great I just had to!! This story had me going, I could not wait to read the next chapter, to the detriment of other things. The characters are all so well depicted and I loved the storyline. This is one story I would have liked to have imagined myself as a closing to Witchblade. I cannot wait to read the next episodes. Please, we really need to find out what happens next between Sara and Ian and how they will manage to trick fate and get back together. I hope that this forced separation from Sara will force Ian to become his own man, while doing everything he can to get back with Sara. I would also like to read more about Vicky and Mobius after they go back to the city and they begin their relationship together in the city, they are so cute together! Great job!!! Linda

this looks good so far:). reading more now...