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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like John and George together and I love how the guys are turning the tables on the girls! (giggle) I hope to see more of this story, WW.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there's more to this story.....it's been so long since an update and you left us hanging just as things were starting to heat up. Please, please update soon !!!!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately I must say that this story isn't all that good. The charactarization of George and John is moderate. The women in this fic act completely stupidly (two adult psychologists and a coroner wouldn't act like that!) and they could probably all blend into one big Mary Sue. Also, grown people don't call other adults boys or girls.
The pace of the fic is nice, and I can tell the author's put a lot of effort in her work. I'm not trying to be offensive, and this is not a flame. All I'm saying is that with some polishing, this would be a very enjoyable fic.
The pace of the fic is nice, and I can tell the author's put a lot of effort in her work. I'm not trying to be offensive, and this is not a flame. All I'm saying is that with some polishing, this would be a very enjoyable fic.
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Just wanted to say, I loved the new chapter. I can't wait for more!!! It was hot hot hot!!!!
Just wanted to say, I loved the new chapter. I can't wait for more!!! It was hot hot hot!!!!
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August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! i love profiler slash, and George/John is my favorite pairing, although sometimes I dabble in George/Bailey. Anyhooo....I love this story, I hope you update soon. :)
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April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this. There isn't a lot of Profiler slash out there, and certainly very li new new slash. this is well thought out, well written and fun. please hurry with the next part