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for Mary & Lucy Get Naked.

by buffyfaith19

person Anon
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i love sibling stories.
they make me so hot.
well actually anything sexy makes me hot.
plz write more thanx
person vgss
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice, always great to see some SH stories :)
person Jay
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really well written, vey hot, but you might wanna think about adding some dialouge to it. just because while reading it, it felt empty. It was great, don't get my wrong, I just think it would be better with a little more dialouge. to break up the action..I donno. But I felt it was the only thing lacking.
person anon
schedule March 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is some sick fucking shit, and I fucking loved it :)
person niki
schedule March 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like this story...never though mary and lucy would do sum-thin like that
person Finger cot
schedule January 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. I thought it was very steamy, sexy, damn... it was just great!
person Sara Jaye
schedule January 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...Why am I not as squicked over this as I probably should be? I'm not saying this is wrong or disgusting...it certainly was an interesting read! I did like the concept of Lucy being pissed off at how hot Mary was, and at the same time getting turned on by her.
schedule January 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good! More! More!
person z
schedule January 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to know I'm not the only one to have thought about this!
You're an excellent writer, whens chapter 2 coming :-) ?