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for The Mistake of a Lifetime

by angela9in

person kat f.
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That was one of the greatest fics I have EVER read! Good job!
person Saskia
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
This was really good! You just have to continue this story for the sake of your readers.
It would be great to see Bosco recovering from that terrible experience.
I'd like to see more storys from you in this fandom.
person crashnburn469
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it was so sad, but good. Please write more
person Dev
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well butter my butt and call me a biscuit! This was really good. I concur with the others, you gotta add more, I mean there's the angst of the moment, but as we are all influenced by our past, show the angst of the future, reliving those moments in his head, nightmares, whatnot. This has great potential!!
person Kylin
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's good, but you gotta continue it. IF I learned anything being a writer it's that you can't just beat up your character and e ite it at that. The best part about angsty rape storie see seeing the courage of the character as he slowlcomecomes normal again.
person me
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I hope you have another chapter or a sequel or something! I liked it! No, I LOVED it!!! More? Please? I wanna find out what happens when the 55 team gets there!