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by Giggles

person Mami Chula
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but this didn't turn me on. You have good ideas but you need to elaborate more on them. And it was kind of crazy how you threw in some random girl. But don't give up maybe you're just better at reading these.
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you need to take a writting class. Add some suspense or some thing Jesus Christ