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for Peace and Quiet

by AnnaO

person athena
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, makes one really feel for Boomer. I think we've all felt pangs of jealousy or envy of somebody elses relationship or friendship. Well done.
person athena
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, really brought the charaters to life.
person Anne29_1999
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. Your character voice is right on, your description of the characters' relationships sounds very realistic, and your ending caught me totally by surprise. I was so deep into Boomer's viewpoint by that time that my heart actually ached for him. Typically, I'm not a big fan of character pieces, but your take on the Apollo/Starbuck/Boomer triumvirate is so unique and well-written that I truly enjoyed this piece. I will have to look for more of your stories in the future.