rate_review Reviews

Hey great story you've written there. Some new stuff to read, not just the normal trory-story. Something special. I would love reading more. So please continue writing this story. It's really great.

Awesome story, I really like it a lot! Plz you've got to write more cos I wanna know what's gonna happen after Tristan/Rory's conversation? Just wondering if you've got a beta reader? Cause I've noticed a few spelling mistakes and if you don't have one, then maybe you should get someone to beta read it before you post it or you could run it through a spell check,(on your computer's writing program.) And plz don't take this too seriously cos I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticism.
Alana

I loved this story. it's really good and damn orignal. Hope you update soon

Wonderful, sad story! Keep writing, please!!!

Arwen!! You didn't telll me that you were posting here!! Meanie!!
...I don't remember what chapter you were up to.... did you write more? I'll hafta re read... YAY!
You know I love it.

J.

OKay... so re-read it...and I loved it all... I remember it all, too! Update again sooon!

j.

Okay, so far this story is G rated, what is getting me frustrated. If you're planning on writing this just like a romance without R scenes why did you post it here instead of in ff.net? Well, I just hope you start writing R scenes really soon, it's getting me frustrated

Hey it's 'just me' again. And by the way, I'm loving your sequel to "Getting Experienced".
I think this fic may be really interesting, but I need some action, it'd be good. I hope you update soon, cause this fic has everything to be amazing.
Good luck

im absolutly loving your fic, i was hoping she was going to stay at her foster parents house because kingking around would have been interesting, but anyway i cant wait to read what happens next. hope you update soon. **Fae