schedule
May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really need to make another chapter in this that has Mary and Lucy going at it while Kevin is sitting there watching and then they get into a triangle and fuck eachother.
schedule
February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not bad. I am not shure I can think of Marry and Lucy doing that, but maybe it is I like the show to much! As for the work, the images are great and the flow was good, but could you try to make it go even more? Bring out the images and the passion.
schedule
January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Spice it up with more description and you've got a well done fic.