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for Blind Fury

by GingerQ

person Kelly Lynn
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best stories I've read on this site in a long time. Beautifully written with a full and well developed plot. The characters were so real I actually cried at the end. Their pain and joy touched me. Sadly, most writers I find only throw conflict in their characters way to give them something to do before the happy ending. It never really matters because it has no lasting impact on them. They don't develope and change. With Blind Fury you rise above that predictable set grove and give us something true, vivid, and moving. It's messy, not picture perfect, and thats what makes it worthwhile. Stay true to your craft. You are a genuine artist.
person Catwoman
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, but it has a sweet ending. Good job.