rate_review Reviews

Hi! I know its been forever and a day since you posted this story so I hope you're still at whatever email address this comes too...just wanted to say that I LOVE this story! I've read it over a dozen times the last couple of years and everytime I read I find something new to love about it. I can't name just one thing, because I love all of it. So very well done! This is one fantastic story!!

And they tell me i'm crazy for loving anime characters.
*grins*
lovely story, if a bit long in some places!

This story was good and well written but the ending troubled me a little bit and I can't tell you why. There was something lacking somewhere and I don't know why, too soon or not quite, I don't know, anyway I still enjoyed it, just wasn't keen on the last chappie.

Well, I made it this far, and I gotta say, BRAVO! Excellently written and worded. Only thing was that some words were jumbled together, but that seems to be a "thing" here that AdultFF seems to have problems with (since I've seen it on just about every story I've read here). You made me stay up WAY passed my bedtime, and my eyes are buggin' out right now. So yeah, good story! XD Everything that happened relationship-wise sucked so much (as in sucked for the characters, not the story), but in the end, I'm very happy all the misunderstandings were cleared up. I'm also glad it wasn't a quick ending either. Lots of things remained unsaid for a long time...something that men tend to do quite often. I know a lot of writers (of the female variety, also assuming you are female as well) tend to make characters declare love after one kiss or even before that for that matter, especially with characters that wouldn't normally be paired together–ie m/m pairings for example. So I'm happy to say, this story took a realistic approach to male relationships, which I found refreshing from the norm.

It went just like an episode as well...as close to an episode of Stargate you could get with the added "relationships". It mighta been a 2 parter for the length, though, but you don't see me complaining one bit. I enjoyed reading this very much. Got me excited and nervous and sweating...not necessarily all at once or in that order, but you get my drift. ;) Great work!

A beautiful tale, spun with skill and a subtle touch. Congradulations!!

The was a lovely story. I could feel the frustation and emotions of the characters as they struggled with thier feelings in a situation they could not seek outside assistance, yet strangely found it. A very good job. It would be nice to see a sequel or another story in this universe where Jack is able to move past his issues and the two are able to fully make love w/ one another.

Kim R aka mysticmcknight.

This is my favorite story in all of AdultFF.net. Nah, in all serious-ness, it is (don't mind seriousness, it's a word in my vocab.) Keep up excellent wri lik like this ^_^.

This was just amazing! An insightful story-line, great characterization, lots of humor and of course steaming hot sex. What more could a girl ask for?;) Wonderful!!!

-g