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for Game 22

by JMA

person mancer
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was a fun one to read. I wasn't too sure at first about reading something from Burns' perspective, but I really like how you pulled it off. The bitter sweet end fit so perfectly, with the characters as well as with the canon, and was so damn sad. Kudos!
person Lyra
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's like "What if M*A*S*H were aired on the Playboy channel?" I could see and hear every bit of narrative as it would be onscreen, and it was made a bazillion times better and more fun by the insight into Frank's brain. I bow to your genius.
person PoisonGirl
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....That was one of the saddest, best stories I have ever read....
person Raven
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I liked!!! especially Radars POV on the sitiuation..
person Raven (again)
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one more thing, just a bit of constructive critisism... When Radar hears things I think it would be more understandable if you put the subiminal parts in Italics. other than that it was one of the best M*A*S*H* Fics I've read.
person Sun-chan
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, what a wonderful story! Thanks so much for sharing your talents with us. This is an absloutly great fanfic.
person Sun-chan
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this yesterday but I couldn't review because the site was having trouble. However, this chapter just blew me away! I really wasn't expecting what happend! My heart was pounding as I read every word. You really surprised me, I ddin't expect to go *there.* Thank you so much for surprising me!
person Hermes Daughter
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i can't remember if i've already reviewed this, but what the hey,
this has got to be one of the best MASH fics i have read, and i love your use of suspence, but please update! i'm really hanging out for what happens here!
oh, and even tho it was unbeta'd, i really liked your characterization of Radar, it showed how he can remain so innocent, yet know so much at the same time
hope u get the time to update soon!
person FallenHawk
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is still awesome. Er...I read it on FF.net, so I don't have to say what I like about it, right? Just in case I do; EVERYTHING!!! Keep writing. =)
person Bartleby
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I love how Radar hears things and he's so much more here than a little Corporal.