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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, god! Great stuff! I'm looking forward to reading much more!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more! Great story so far, really pulled me into the plot.
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how sad! I really like this story! Please update as soon as possible!
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's great so far! Love it! As I may have said before, everyone is sooo in character. Nice plot line. Very well written. Love the
interaction between Narak and Data! Will be waiting for your next update. Ras.
interaction between Narak and Data! Will be waiting for your next update. Ras.
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October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HIYA! Love the first chapter! You have excellent writing skills. This story is very well written. The characters are all in there true
rolls (meaning they are all in character.) ^_^. Dialoge is perfect. I saw no mistakes in grammer or puntuation. If there were, I didn't realize it because I was engrossed with reading. I will await patiently for your next chapter. Ras.
rolls (meaning they are all in character.) ^_^. Dialoge is perfect. I saw no mistakes in grammer or puntuation. If there were, I didn't realize it because I was engrossed with reading. I will await patiently for your next chapter. Ras.